Journal Entry 48
TS: 11:21:13
… and I will never change. I see the world through tint. The different colors of my shades present the many facets of my personality. What mood am I in today?
The doorman calls me “Mr. Banks” as I leave the building. He is a Category D and would never make the collection. Still… what would it be like to play along his ribcage with my knife? One can wonder… I roll the idea around my tongue.
I stroll amongst them, a shining example no one notices. But they will notice me one day. All shapes, sizes, ages, nationalities, I see them all and shudder trimmers of desire.
Not just any can make the cut. An audition worthy of Broadway is held each day as I allow my sensations to take over and visualize the moment with each. Not a Category B today, no I will indulge myself and will not settle for second class meat.
The decision has been made and my hands start to sweat with the sheer joy of anticipation. There is no stopping me from having what I want… what I need. It will be quiet in the night once more… soon once again.
Mr. Banks
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You need to make a collection of such creepy character sketches (like 15-20 of them), huddle them all under a creepy title, and get them published ASAP. You are seriously talented and moreover, I think you understand complex dispositions and personality traits.
That is a great compliment thank you! I have just started writing fiction and character based story lines this year actually, so I appreciate the feedback! If you get a chance to read my flash fiction let me know if it also is good or needs improvement. -OM
The pleasure is all mine. I’ll make it a point to go through some of your flash fiction.
Not creeped out, but it sounds like the bones of a publishable short story; if anyone still publishes those.
It would probably make a good further write. I wonder how many people I would creep out though if I did. lol
It’s a matter of curiosity, but I think part of what you do is pushing the boundaries of comfort. I say, go with it if you’ve got the drive. It would be interesting. And it’s kind of fun to creep people out, right?
Heh, I suppose it is. A new concept to me. 😉
Really? Think of the popularity of American Psycho and Dexter as just two examples. People enjoy these kinds of fictions.
Creepy!
LoL, good! 😉
I like this 😀 sonmicloud
Heh, uh oh “like” it huh. Everyone else has been creeped out lol.
That’s why I like it. Not everyone can convincingly creep people out you know. It’s believable, and such unpleasantries absolutely need to be so in fiction. Unless it’s actually non fiction and you really are like that. Then yes, you’re just a weird creepy opinionated man ha! 😉 sonmicloud
lmao… now that got a smile.
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– sonmicloud
Ewwww. Now you scare me. 🙂
hahahaha I laughed actually when I read this and my daughter goes “what is it? What is it?” She is 4 heh.
hahahaha 😀